Okay, after reading my last post I think I was wrong in calling girl "stupid".  But something is wrong with her in the learning department.  She needs help.  For your viewing pleasure I will type up her story that she needed to write and give me your thoughts.  Personally, this story looks like a 1st grader wrote it. 
The Lost Costume
On Sunday, October 31, 2004, I was looking for my Haloween costume.  So I started looking for my costume, I went down stairs and looked in the laundry room, no not there.  Is it in the kichen, no.  maybe my mom put it in the closet.  So I opened the door slowely and walked in and AHHHHH HHHELLLPPP!  Thump I went on the ground.
Gross there is this mucky green stickey mush on the ground, so I stood you tried to wipe the gunk off.  So I kept creeping around, and there was graffiti all over the walls, and a picture of a clown too.  There was a lot of garbage, and spit balls.  There was also blood dripping from the ceiling, and the plants growing out of the walls.  So I just kept walking, and on the left of me there was a Wholly Mammonth and flies all over it.  Then something pulled me to the wall, and choked me, so I kicked it and it went away, well that's what I thought, then I heared a bell like the sound in a wrestling mach ding, ding.  So I pretended to wrestled the ghost.......after a while I was taken by the hand, and it was shoken by some thing.  Then this door led open and led me to the costume.
After I climbed out of the "closet" I took a shower, and got chaned to go trick or treating!
Good Lord!  That was hard for me to type with all the mistakes.   I feel bad for girl.  This is acceptable work in her eyes.  Her parents and I are stuck with what to do with her.  I don't know anymore.
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